Malta Postcard

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Dear Shirley,
We went on a trip to Comino. It is a really small island, but beautiful, on this island there is one hotel. The beaches of the island are really beautiful. This picture we got here is taken from our drone. The crystal clear water is so beautiful that it seems like you can see the bottom of the ocean. We also went snorkeling, the underwater world was so beautiful that I almost lost my Go Pro in the water.
Not just the underwater world was perfect, but the pollution in Taiwan is way more intense. In Comino, you can see through the clouds, and see a blue sky. We felt really relaxed, lying on the stones and watching a view of a clear ocean and a blue sky. This trip to Comino let us relax and forget everything that was disturbing.
























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  1. UnknownApril 5, 2017 at 4:09 AM

    I really enjoyed reading your postcard. I liked how you described the different beauties of different places. It seemed you remembered you are writing to Shirley, and not just a bunch of information. I also liked how you compared that place to where you are now, because it can give a better image of that place.
    Overall, this was very well written!
    :)

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  2. UnknownApril 5, 2017 at 5:35 AM

    Although you did good job pics looks nice and describing the beauties of the island, it's hard to read, to be honest. I think there is way better way to organize the sentences better, since the information is scattered all over the paragraph. Besides, on the second paragraph, what does Taiwan's pollution have to do with this whole thing? IMHP, it looks like you just compressed everything you thought of together.

    (Sry 4 le long post here ish a potato. つ(potato) )

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